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If I Died Tomorrow.. (12/04/09)

11:07 Dec 04 2009
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If I died tomorrow

would you even care..?

would you fell any sorrow..?

or would you think

that life was fair..?



Did you mean any of the things

that you once said..?

or did you just say those words

to put a sense of false hope

in my head..?



Do you secretly laugh

when you know I'm around..?

is that why you never make

a single sound..?



Honestly I don't know what

to think anymore

but one things for sure

you had no problem

showing me the front door



I guess when it comes down to it

I should of known it all along

that everything about me

is totally wrong



I can't seems to do anything right

I can't even stand my own sight

you had every right to walk away

hell.. if I was you.. I wouldn't stay



just out of curiosity

if I died tomorrow

would you even care..?

would you feel any misery..?

would you fell any sorrow..?

or would you sit back

have a drink and think

that life is finally fair..?


COMMENTS

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vampyrebeauty
vampyrebeauty
11:00 May 08 2010

Nice writing. Kind of sad but that how life is sometimes...





PAGAN
PAGAN
18:24 Jul 29 2010

yep, kinda sad but we will all be there at some point. great poem i know just how that feels :)





xxNemesisxx
xxNemesisxx
00:12 Aug 18 2010

nice





vates
vates
06:58 Sep 16 2010

I LOVE ur poem, so powerful and meaningful. I get that way sometimes.





Reposing
Reposing
00:33 Oct 28 2010

i like this one...





LuvlySwan86
LuvlySwan86
07:59 Aug 31 2016

Allow me to be the first to say -screw whoever made you feel like that at the time.

You seem to be a very emotionally driven person. Me too.

But you know, that's what makes us special.

Never forget that.








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